FULL STORY! My cheating wife hugged me goodbye before I left for my fishing trip. But when I woke up, I heard her voice: Did you finally kill him? But my army skills and my will to survive had saved me. She was on her knees begging me to forgive her, but I was already administering justice.
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15 Comments
This story is great heard it a couple of times now and it's never boring
Needs a better ending
This has the same scene of an attack near the boat house as in the story where the OP became a body guard for a rich lady, and his son's fiance was the rich lady's long lost daughter.
I do like the overall story, and the scene fit better in this story.
The transition from a night with Masha, then directly to Rita was confusing. And the end was disorienting. Was he thrown into the water? If so how did grandpa get him out of the water? Why was grandpa even looking for him? I think it should have ended with him and Masha speeding off, or more elaboration on the "real" ending. Ambiguousness is fine in an ending, but a confusing ending is frustrating for the reader.
Talk about a grade-Z Netflix flick…
Wow just wow! That wife was a evil B. It’s just amazing what people will plot to get others money nstead of getting their damn own. Love the beast! Op should of let hm out to make dirt food out the wife and her lover. Like that grandpa didn’t hesitate to put a bullet in her.
The stories tho made up are good. But narrator needs to stop getting soo high before hand or something. There’s so many parts that just jump to another part and make absolutely no sense whatsoever. Hour and 27 mins wasted because you can’t carry the story. It’s like someone hit fast forward. Damn
Your's storylines mystery novel are awesome & amazing! That I am looking forward 2 hearing more stories 2 come my way.
Proofreading will help with the story's inconsistencies and maybe improve the story
I discovered the treachery of my love 💓 ❤ 😍 I found her beloved poodle 🐩 fifi. Without hesitation I plunged my knife 🔪 into fifi's right eye 👁 😢.
Our hearts 💕 were beating in unison. I love you serge chortled labinska. We threw all caution to the wind and clutched hands passionately.
𝔊𝔬𝔡 𝔰𝔱𝔬𝔯𝔶
So messy story. Too complicated.
Hard to read. Knowledge of English might have helped.
Aside from the language problems, enjoyed the story. Really twisted ending!
This wife is an evil demon.