Some light styling on 3 of my trees

I got some advice on the beginnr thread a few weeks ago and here's my crack at some wiring and styling.
My junipers are pom pommed I know, but tried to shape the branches and cut the smaller juniper and cedrus a new leader, first go at gin (not sure if I'm meant to go deeper or if this will stay white with some treatment ?).
Also first go at raffia on the older juniper as its branches felt brittle – it worked well but now I've tried it i feel like I need to redo it to give it more movement.
Any feedback welcomed 😊